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Resurrecting Old Stories

Beholder, Bellerophon and Cerberus

by Grey Wolf


The science fiction trilogy starts off with Beholder, set on a gigantic space station, or a small habitation, depending on your viewpoint. Here, the tensions between the Governor and the criminal underworld have come to a head, and moves are afoot by the latter to take out the core and cripple the station. However, nobody has factored in war with alien Delkh species, a war which to the inhabitants seems to come out of nowhere.


This is the first story in a planned science fiction trilogy written in the late 1990s, and saved onto floppy discs. At one point, I went through every surviving disc and amalgamated the various parts until I had a whole. A few parts are lost, the floppy perhaps not surviving even those few years before the first aggregation, but by and large the story as a whole survived.


But it was not a coherent whole. The initial aim had been to create a small band of renegades, and whilst this occurred, Beholder took on a life of its own, with the background plot taking over, and its characters becoming the driving force behind the story. In any rewrite, this needs to be rationalised, so that the story does not appear to veer so drastically off course, in reading.


Beholder was followed by Bellerophon, with new characters and new settings, within the context of the war between humanity and the Delkh. We are introduced once again to the AI Ariadne, whom in Beholder was stowed away in the hold of one of the ships used for emergency evacuation in the face of Delkh attack. Here, she is taken in hand by new characters, with new motives, and new backgrounds.


Ariadne is the unifying force behind the trilogy. In the final part, Cerberus, we find the AI damaged and suffering a crisis of being. Who is she? What is she? What is real? Indeed, what is reality?


Cerberus reintroduces us to some of the characters of Beholder, most specifically Tarli Callas, the adolescent runner turned saboteur on behalf of the criminal underworld. Now part of Vorp's crew, she is captured in a mission to a nowhere planet, and brought by her captors before the damaged shell of Ariadne. Can the girl get through to her old "friend"? Can she help to repair the AI and convince it of its former identity?


All 3 cover images for the trilogy have been created by Rpbin Stacey, but it is that of Cerberus that shines through the most. We see Tarli, in the midst of her captors, abused and dishevelled, brought to try to commune with the damaged AI.


So, when can the reader enjoy the trilogy? Not anytime soon. Beholder, whilst existing needs a big rewrite for the first section, whilst neither Bellerophon nor Cerberus exist in a finished state.


However, the author IS planning to complete and publish the whole trilogy and even has a sequel in the works. Time is the only master, but time can be a difficult master.


For now, cover images have been sourced for all 3 books, and displayed here. That for Cerberus can be seen in development and completion as artist Robin Stacey responded to the author's wishes for minor corrections.


It is hoped that Beholder will be edited, rewritten at the start, and published during 2023 as part of the range from Scimitar Edge.


Bellerophon and Cerberus will take longer, but one day they too will see the light of day. Until that day, you have the images here. Enjoy!


The process of resurrection is an interesting one, requiring me, the author, to get to know the characters again, their motivations, and hopes. As the story progresses through the books, their foci change, their relationships develop, and their standing within the group fluctuates.


Some characters never die in your head. Tarli was one of those, a person who from her first introduction was solid and real. Perhaps Marat is another, certainly Vorp as he ended up, grey-haired, injured and partially deaf. The political structure in which these people live is evolving, but you can be sure that Tarli will make her own mark, and be her own person. And, of course, that is what leads to her desperate situation at the start of Cerberus...





The basic image for Beholder, by Robin Stacey





The basic image for Bellerophon, by Robin Stacey





The initial character study for Tarli, by Robin Stacey





The final image for Cerberus, by Robin Stacey






Writing The Shifting Sands - Part 1

Alternate History

by Grey Wolf


This novel/series began in early 2020 as something of a daydream based around the scene where Lord Wolfe and Carlotta effectively sack half the staff of the mansion they have just bought. I then worked both backwards and forwards from this, establishing the basics of their backstory (Wolfe's Spanish wife died in childbirth, his fortune made as Governor of South Africa etc) and the salient details of the plot going forwards.


When I began writing the narrative I thus had a skeleton outline of sorts, lots of which was missing in important places, but also where from time to time a plethora of detail was available at what might seem unimportant points, the background to the character Luke being an example of the latter.


Although the scene in the mansion was where the whole idea began, working backwards the novel now started back in the enormous dominion of South Africa, which in today's terms would include all of Zimbabwe, Zambia and the Katanga province of the DRC. The capital of this huge governorship was Centralia, constructed where today's Harare (yesterday's Salisbury) was.


The Emperor has died and the new emperor, for long a Crown Prince simmering in inaction and building up his own clique, has now come to the throne intending to stamp his mark upon the world. He intends to raise his own men to positions of power immediately, and as we soon learn he intends to end the world war against the Russians and the Germans with a peace offer that they cannot refuse.


This novel being alternate history, I decided that the Portuguese empire had been reabsorbed by the Spanish in the 18th century, and the Netherlands and their empire conqauered by the Germans in the 19th. This, added to an America that never formed the United States, provided for the main geopolitical differences in this world.


The first chapter thus opens with Lord Wolfe and Carlotta returning to the governor's mansion in Centralia, Carlotta going upstairs to change for dinner, and Wolfe to his study to work through some of the never-ending paperwork. While he is there one of his main servants informs him that he has been replaced, effectively sacked, and as Wolfe quickly calculates all of the wealth and treasure from his appointment is suddenly at risk.


This first chapter works to show Wolfe and Carlotta's relationship, and to show how Wolfe has contacts, and people who he hopes he can trust in many places. It also begins to show Carlotta as a ten year old girl with a certain power of her own - it is she who guilts Rex into liquidating Wolfe's shares and remitting the money to a bank where he can access them. This, though, is an act that Wolfe himself knows he will owe Rex a debt for.


This turn of events sees Lord Wolfe and Carlotta exit SAF via Spanish-owned Angola, in so doing introducing us to another of his friends and contacts, Gonzales. From there they travel via West Africa to Arnhem, where the peace treaty negotiations are taking place. Due to his ostracisation at home, Wolfe is forced to rely on Spanish help to get certification at the conference.


Arnhem of course is a German city in this story, and is also somewhat battle-damaged from the war. It is where we see hints of the Germans as heirs of the Dutch East India Company. Lord Wolfe and Carlotta arrive as just two among thousands of people flocking to the city in the wake of the armistice that has ended the Great War. I decided I wanted to take some time to show off the city, and show how it is almost entirely German, rebuilt by them after their conquest of it a hundred years before. To this end, I decided a tram ride would allow them to look out and see various things, then a visit to a ruined church bombed by British aircraft in the war.


Another element I wanted to expand on at this juncture was the ex-American colonies where each of the original states has become an independent dominion, and where their entry into the war served to shift the balance against the Russians and the Germans. To this end we meet members of the Pennsylvania delegation, in General Augustus Reed and his widowed daughter Lucille Maguire.


After the conclusion of the peace conference, Lord Wolfe and Carlotta head to London, not least to try to chase down the location of all of their luggage which they had routed out of SAF via Lourenco Marquez in Spanish Mozambique. Whilst staying in a hotel, they see an advertisement for immediate sale of a mansion and all its grounds previously belonging to a lord who is now dead, and his estate effectively bankrupt. Carlotta presses her father to lay down an offer late at night, and he can see that their current existence, without a base or somewhere to call home is very stressful to her.


Their purchase of Harcourt Hall, and arrival there brings the story full circle to the original beginning that I had daydreamed. Wolfe has essentially purchased someone else's mansion, and the staff that come with it. The staff are not happy with a new owner, new terms and conditions, and new ways of doing things and threaten to quit en masse. One of them insults Carlotta, and this when I wrote it was the turning point. Wolfe was never going to allow that, and at that point he snaps and accepts their resignations. Things could have gone bad from here, but the young maids and footmen step forward and say they would be willing to work for him and Carlotta, and Wolfe sees the old guard off the premises, being left with a very young, but loyal staff, something which forms the basis of a lot of the novel going forward.


For a while, The Shifting Sands would become parochial, focused on the town of Monksbury and their residence of Harcourt Hall, and Lord Wolfe and Carlotta's work to make a new home for themselves. But beneath it all global events continue to move, and factions are at work to get Lord Wolfe's diplomatic talents back into play to break a dangerous international deadlock.





Lord Wolfe and Carlotta as created by Robin Stacey





Covers of books are always amalgams of the contents within, and this image of the car in front of the hall does not match the actual description of the place within the novel, but does show the general idea of these elements.





Lord Wolfe and Carlotta with the car and the hall behind, an early idea of their placement for the cover before the final positions were decided upon. With thanks to Robin Stacey.





The final cover of the book, published in early Summer 2022.






How To Write Alternate History

Essays in Creative Writing

Development of The Book


Grey Wolf originally published his thoughts on writing Alternate History to his blog, as well as a few to the discussion website www.alternatehistory.com of which he was a member. In 2013 he collected them together in a book entitled "How To Write Alternate History" and used a photograph of a colliery head gear for its cover. It was quite a striking image, but in a sense was rather too generic for the book. However, he had other projects in hand, and focused on those in the next few years.


This period included working with the artist Derek Roberts, from Barking in east London, on book covers, initially a retro science-fiction feel for "Time of the Darkness" and then through "Never The Dawn", "Ten Naval Battles" and "The Slayer".


The next work they agreed was entitled "Tsar Michael The Great" which was initially intended to be the cover for a book of that name. The agreed design would show the chronological scope of that story, from bi-planes to jet fighters, and focus on the person of the Tsar, standing in front of a burning Russian city. Initial design studies focused on the four corner elements - the jet fighter, the bi-plane, the tank and the battleship. Two of them are shown below.




In 2016 Grey Wolf decided that the files for the book were not up to publication standard, but that the cover painting, now completed, would make a perfect new cover for "How To Write Alternate History" which had been needing a permanent and focused cover since its publication.


At the same time, Grey Wolf wanted to update the book, and to add a few more essays which he had unearthed, unpublished on his blog, but saved in his files. These included foci on Art and Architecture in Alternate History.


In 2017, these two trends came together. The updated text, with the new articles, and the new cover art, "Tsar Michael The Great" by Derek Roberts, were put together into a new edition of "How To Write Alternate History" published by Wolfian Press. In December 2019, it was republished by Wolfian Press Publications, a Nielsen-registered imprint.


In Summer of 2021, as part of the publishing reorganisation that was to see all WPP books republished by the Scimitar Edge imprint, Grey Wolf further expanded the book for the new edition. Chapters on subjects such as logistics, "Who is the boss of who?", aristocracy and colonisation were included, with the aim of showing how a variety of things worked in reality, and how realistically these could be built on, changed, or used in different contexts.






The original cover for "How To Write Alternate History". The headgear formerly stood at Cefn Coed Colliery Museum, Crynant, but has now been dismantled.





The current cover of "How To Write Alternate History" utilising Derek Roberts' painting "Tsar Michael The Great".


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